Talk about a journey in your pocket! That was a lot of fun and the writing inspires me to be a better writer altogether. Thanks for sharing the story of this femme-fatale. Hope to see more.
Also, I feel like you were trying to get players NOT to kill, so I aimed for their weapons thinking I might get a better out-come. Another ending even. Maybe I suck, but nothing happened. I still killed a bunch of people. If the choice to spare their lives was in this game, that would've been awesome. Perhaps, and I know its a bit too soon to suggest, you could include that in a sequel or a future game? ;)